by Greg Beam Apr 24, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
love is
Love is kind, love is gentle, love is sweet, |
Love is kind, love is gentle, love is sweet, |
by Sumit Ojha
WOW!! Excellent work... Words flow is very nice... |
by PygmyPuff
Hmm... This has potential, however it seems too similar to the scripture. Plus "Love is" doesnt flow well... if you look on the left margin, theres no pattern or reason for the placement. Love is Love is Love is Loves etc... no reason for each... I would suggest more lines which dont begin with "Love"... pehaps lines that arent directly from the verse? And maybe to diversify it from the scripture you will limit yourself how many words are placed i order in ur poem from orginal.. you know what i mean? maybe quote a line, explain, quote, justify, quote, elaborate. Get it? I ramble a bit, sorry. |
(: Love CAN be rebellious! That was my favorite line, made me giggle. This is a very sweet, very true kind of poem. It was fluid, heartfelt, and full of sincere meaning -- it really represented love in it's finest suit. Though this was written simply, it was not cliche, just adorable. One thing though: |
Nice write, love is so many different things in life and to express it through poetry is truely amazing. Although short in nature, this write was straight to the point and full of heart. Keep up the great work. |