This was kinda hard to read but maybe im stupid. If you want to talk you can any time ok dw i wont judge you ill help you with anything you need to get off your chest ok. Your poetry is good and can be expanded into something wonderful, dont let people stop you from what you love ok xxx alex xxx

Loved the poem! Great job:D 5
Sky!

I love this. Your word choice was really good, and the emtions were clear, great job. Keep it coming.

Write a book: the villanies of love

was grate