If You Asked

by PygmyPuff   Apr 24, 2007


I would deny my faith.
I would deny my friends,
If you asked me to.

They can mock me,
And I would do nothing,
If you asked that of me.

I would go to the end of the world.
Even change my personal style.
If you asked me to.

I would travel to the moon.
I would travel to the stars.
If you asked that of me.

If only you would ask.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    I like the meaning behind this one. It doesn't flow as well as some of your others, but it's still good. Thanks for the comment. =]

  • 16 years ago

    by noha

    I love this alot ,the way you write is too simple and powerfull,nicely flow 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautifully Disfigured

    "personality" thats the only mistake. other than that my only comment is dont change for anyone. you have a really good poem here and it describes things that people would actually do to others. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tammie

    I think this is a very sweet poem. It is somewhat something that you shouldn't do for someone, but it is showing that you really do love them. The flow was good and the emotion there. I think you could expand, but for a short poem, you put a very heartfelt point across of yours. Good job.

    Tammie

  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Wow, that is sure saying a lot.

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