Wow, that is sure saying a lot.

I think this is a very sweet poem. It is somewhat something that you shouldn't do for someone, but it is showing that you really do love them. The flow was good and the emotion there. I think you could expand, but for a short poem, you put a very heartfelt point across of yours. Good job.

Tammie

"personality" thats the only mistake. other than that my only comment is dont change for anyone. you have a really good poem here and it describes things that people would actually do to others. 5/5

I love this alot ,the way you write is too simple and powerfull,nicely flow 5/5

I like the meaning behind this one. It doesn't flow as well as some of your others, but it's still good. Thanks for the comment. =]