Comments : Lust

  • 17 years ago

    by Nick who Plays Pool

    Well done, very well written and organized. It had a rhythmatic feel to it and I enjoyed it, excellent poem.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by fvalconbridge

    5/5 so amazing i loved it. im going to cjeck out your other poems!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Maggie Joseph

    Gosh..this poem reminds me of myself...i cheated on my ex.. he had such strong feelings for me..i left him for his cousin's boyfriend. and his cousins boyfriend left her for me...im surprised he still talks to me..i feel bad but yea anyways GREAT poem..

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    Awww becca that was sooo good!!... i love the way you write, its amazing... 5/5 from me

    i feel like i havent talked to you in awhile haha.. but i talked to you like yesterday haha but yeah ttul

  • 17 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    EXCELLENT EXCELLENT EXCELLENT!!!! Girl you are such a good writer i love reading your poems =)