Again, very good. I liked the way you addressed yourself in each line, but always a different aspect of you. While is wasn't anything new, it is still very well written. 5/5

I think that this is a great poem and is one of the best I have ever read. 5/5

Very nice! I liked this poem a lot it had a good emotion and it was original nice 5/5 from me

I actually really like this poem. i gave it 4/5 though because it wasnt really one of the best that i have read but still great job!

I really like this!! I was written very uniquely!! I loved it! 5/5

I'm delighted to read a different manner of poem today. I'm quite surprised that this doesn't rank with your finest works, whereas it's a very captivating poem.
I like it very much!

I liked this poem very much, It was strong and a very interesting read. The emotion flowed nicely throughout this. Well done on a nicely penned poem.
5/5
~mel

Very original i think and also showing your talent :) even thought it's under sad poems i felt like it had positive emotion to it :) Amazing poem!

Wow its original good job I must admit you are better then I
-Shadowe rates 5/5

Wow its original good job I must admit you are better then I
-Shadowe rates 5/5

Actually i thought it was really good!
Nice Job!
It turns my body so weak

i liek that
very very good job
keep writing
youa re very good
~Shannon~

'O dear confidant, I want to love
But then again, I do not
Experience of it I want to feel
I want cupids arrow shot'

You never say why you dont want to feel it. You're asking if you can and when will you or even if you ever will but you never elaborate on why you dont want to.
Otherwise, great write! 4/5

Aw you're really talented! I like the way you begin each stanza! :) good job!

I love the way that you use repition in your stanza also i like the fact that you use 'o' at the start of each stanza also. The storyline flowed well i feel and i enjoyed reading it ell done xxx alex xxx

I really, really enjoyed this one. It was very different yet easy to read. The flow was dead on. And well, just a great poem. Keep it up,'
-Ally

Actually this was a really good one, you have great talent..keep it going!! .:*.

I liked this. The flow was constantly well penned and the wording was very well done. However, I feel like this was missing something, yet I can't pin-point what. I agree that you maybe need to elaborate more on things, so we gain a better understanding.

Very well written, nonetheless.

This is a great poem, not one of your best..but still wonderful ;)...loved it.

~Austin

Agree, not your best.
But certainly not bad at all!
Well done! Great use of words
and well penned! God Bless 5/5
<3tay(^_^)
I enjoyed your poems.Thank you for the comments and rates.