Dreaming

Black eyes
looking in a Black Heart
Staring into Darkness
waiting for Death to come
Evey Night you dream
you dream of a violent, painful and slow death
your own painful, slow and violent death
your life is a bloody hell
a big mess
not worthy to live
cos no one cares
everyone leaves me
my friends...

when i read this i could read no more its like i have been stabbed in the heart over and over i have never been in this much emotional and physical pain since my girlfriend whoome i loved cheated on me your my brother and brothers never leave each other well... some do but not me i am so hurt and so depressed by this i dont know what to do ... if u die i will find a very high bridge too... i love you bro shit ! im crying now its not even funny dhit wahere the hell is the love i once knew ??

**speechless**
That was amazing && your so talented, love the depth of the poem

Wow. Again you made me speechless! Keep it up!

This was scary lol i liked it alot though because the way it was layed out was very easy to read. I loved ...
i dream of a violent, painful and slow death
my own painful, slow and violent death. because it repeats the the noun death, this is interesting because t enforces the theme and carries the connotations into th next level of deepness. well written :D

xxx alex xxx