Man this poem is GReat man Deffinatly goin as one of my favorites

Aww this was great. i bet you would have won the contest. this was trully awesome!

5/5 David

Good job on the poem ....a difficult subject to write about. All the best, Debbie

Wow that was way too awsome sweet poem 5/5 could you read my new one.

Poe's love for Lenore was truly great. Amazing how the one thing that gives you life can also take away the very breath you breathe and leave you yearning for death.

Though in the end it must be said that despite the pain and heartbreaking death, their love was truly one that every person at some point in life wishes to obtain.

You have a way with the keystrokes to show both sides of love in a few simple verses. While the heartbreak is clearly there so is the desire to obtain such high heartfelt emotions.

--Sher

Very good. I really enjoyed the story line and plead/begging in it it showed more detail when you give more then one emotion in a poem it was very good! keep it up