Chances

by Nikki   Apr 24, 2007


I don't know what to say
you've have given me so many chances
and now you're giving me one more.
to prove to you
i have changed
see i knew all along you never gave up
gave up on our friendship
all we needed was time and
space to think
maybe it took a long time
but in the end it was worth it.
I am here today to say
I have really have changed
as you can see
and that's why i think
you have given this chance
I promise i won't screw up
i wont mess up
because I'm not the girl i was 5 months ago,
If you didn't give me one last chance
then i would of known that you were done
with me
you're giving me one more last chance
and I'm taking it
hopefully things will work out this time around
If they wont
or don't
then it wasn't suppose to be that way again.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    This poem is great i love it

  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    For a young writer I found the emotion well written but agree with some of the others above about a little more structure. I like free verse myself though so I can relate to those poets who choose not to ryhme. keep up the good works..

  • 16 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Aww i like this poem alot..
    i can relate to this.. the flow and words were really good in this. keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    I really liked this poem. I think it should have been broken up into stanzas, but it was okay how it was. You did a good job with it.
    Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    Not the typical poem, but it's still really nice.
    almost like a letter... :)
    yep i like letters, and i def like this. ALOT. :)

Read All Comments (9)

More Poems By Nikki