The Room Of Secrets

by Hidden Feelings within these Words   Apr 24, 2007


Do you see that room?
At the end of the hall?
That's my place of doom,
where at anytime I can fall.

My life I go there to think about.
I can go there and simply cry.
Or just throw things and shout.
And there I can let go and die.

No one else is allowed in this place,
this is my room, for only me.
My mascara, teary-eyed face...
I come here so no others will see.

I continue to try and hide my fears,
in this room, from anything I can hide.
I've completely cried all my tears,
and now unto you I will try to confide.

I wrote this the day before I posted it.. It is how most of us feel, in my opinion.. People go through trials all the time, may they be big or small..So, everyone needs this room at some point in their life. Rate and comment it, if you like. Thanks so much for reading. =)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a good poem the flow was good I loved the message and images you made the reader gaze into were like a mirror and for that I gave. Good job Plot121

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Great poem! Good structure! I like the opening stanza it grabs the readers attention! well done! and yeah everyone go through trials in life :) well done! 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem and very true:) 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Alex

    I always cry in the shower, cause I share a room with my sister haha. I love this poem though.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very nice and Yes i can deeply relate my room is like my sanctuary(sp?) I think you did a great job of showing how all our emotions are left in our rooms

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