by Hidden Feelings within these Words Apr 24, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Do you see that room? |
by Robert
This was a good poem the flow was good I loved the message and images you made the reader gaze into were like a mirror and for that I gave. Good job Plot121 |
by Marc Ortiz
Great poem! Good structure! I like the opening stanza it grabs the readers attention! well done! and yeah everyone go through trials in life :) well done! 5/5! |
by Brittany C
Great poem and very true:) 5/5 |
by Alex
I always cry in the shower, cause I share a room with my sister haha. I love this poem though. |
by Kaila
Very nice and Yes i can deeply relate my room is like my sanctuary(sp?) I think you did a great job of showing how all our emotions are left in our rooms |