A Plea For Help

"As I stand right here,
This mirror I look into.
To myself I think..
this is me, this is true."

I love this stanza it's my favorite. And I like the rhynmes in this one as well.

"When looking into that
mirror, I simply just cry.
Thinking about my life,
Those thought can't lie."

I think that maybe you should switch around simply and jut so it's "just simply" But it's good either way. The last line I don't reall get, but it's good anyways.

"I'm ugly, stupid and fat,
I hate myself ever day,
nobody wants me, and
that is true in every way."

This one is sad. I don't think you should think that way. It's not good to think like that.

"Why do I feel this way?
Can you just tell me why?
Help me out here,
at least for me, just try."

I like this last stanza but not as much as the other ones. I think the flow kind of got lost a little bit.

All together it was a great poem though!

Soda.

Aww thanks for sharing this feelings. and yeah dont feel that way! :) Just smile A very beautiful poem! lots of emotion running in it ;) well done! keep it up :)

Aww thanks for sharing this feelings. and yeah dont feel that way! :) Just smile A very beautiful poem! lots of emotion running in it ;) well done! keep it up :)

I thought it was a bit cliche, but you might really feel this way, many do. So, I guess I'll let it slide, eh It was an okay poem, I think it could have used a bit more emotion in it, though.

Hey...
I know exactly how you feel...
Please don't think of yourself negatively though.
You are wonderful.
Nice poem