Excellent sharing of your feelings. I think alot of people feel the same way. You did a good job expressing yourself. Nice flow, well penned, you did a good job.

Wow i just get this feeling of empathy for you when you right these words down, i think that this is an extremely well written piece and i appreciate your willingness to express your emotions to the public... a 5/5 job!

if u have time, could you please rate/cmnt one of my poems?
cheers...xxx

Hummm...the flow was pretty scratchy...But other than that is seemed ok..I mean it had emotion and everything...4/5 b/c of the flow..

Wow...i really enjoyed reading this poem...I especially liked the ending, connected the looking into the mirror and asking yourself to do something for yourself, as a favor...very good. 5/5 -unattractive1

Good job.. the flow was a little off. but now all poems have to flow all the time.. anyway great job.. keep writing!

This is a good poem.
It flowed well and the emotion was shown.
The only thing I didn't like is that its a cliche poem.
Overall good poem 5/5

[Sarah]

Great poem pure emotion and deep feelings i loved it keep it up

Very interesting poem
sad
but good

The way this was written was wonderful. Im not a big fan of poems that knock yourself but it was written wonderfully and i love to read your poems

Great poem I think that there are many who could relate to it well. I really liked this one. 5/5

Hey...
I know exactly how you feel...
Please don't think of yourself negatively though.
You are wonderful.
Nice poem

I thought it was a bit cliche, but you might really feel this way, many do. So, I guess I'll let it slide, eh It was an okay poem, I think it could have used a bit more emotion in it, though.

Aww thanks for sharing this feelings. and yeah dont feel that way! :) Just smile A very beautiful poem! lots of emotion running in it ;) well done! keep it up :)

Aww thanks for sharing this feelings. and yeah dont feel that way! :) Just smile A very beautiful poem! lots of emotion running in it ;) well done! keep it up :)

"As I stand right here,
This mirror I look into.
To myself I think..
this is me, this is true."

I love this stanza it's my favorite. And I like the rhynmes in this one as well.

"When looking into that
mirror, I simply just cry.
Thinking about my life,
Those thought can't lie."

I think that maybe you should switch around simply and jut so it's "just simply" But it's good either way. The last line I don't reall get, but it's good anyways.

"I'm ugly, stupid and fat,
I hate myself ever day,
nobody wants me, and
that is true in every way."

This one is sad. I don't think you should think that way. It's not good to think like that.

"Why do I feel this way?
Can you just tell me why?
Help me out here,
at least for me, just try."

I like this last stanza but not as much as the other ones. I think the flow kind of got lost a little bit.

All together it was a great poem though!

Soda.