Don't Tell

by Brittany C   Apr 24, 2007


Shh don't tell anyone this.
Please you must promise.
Ok, here it is I think I'm
in love with him.

I don't know how it happened.
One day I thought nothing
of this guy and the next
day I'm in love with him.

Could this be love at first sight?
No,no, it can't be it's impossible.
I mean, oh who am I kidding.
I'm in love. God I'm so confused.

Now don't you tell anyone.
I need to figure this out.
Yes, I'm sure. I don't know
how it happened but I'm in love.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Hidden Feelings within these Words

    I loved this poem. It was sweet, I love the "shh, don't tell anyone" parts. It was cute. Even though it was short, it grabs the readers attention and they just want to see what we are keeping a secret, it was great. Keep it up .=)
    -Ally

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    I thought this poem was cute, and great for a poem so short. I liked the first stanza, lots. : D Keep it up, hun. <3

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    OK, usually when somene knows or has a feeling for someone and they're confused, this is what they are saying in their mind. That's too funy. Well great write! god Bless 5/5
    <3Tay^__^ily

  • 17 years ago

    by Austin

    This was written well. you seem to be fighting with yourself...trying to figure out what is right and what is wrong...4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelsea

    It's sweet, good job! =]
    5/5

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