Comments : The Untold Story

  • 20 years ago

    by Amy

    Thanks so much 4 the coments, im glad u guys liked the poem

  • 20 years ago

    by Amy

    dont worry Crystal, obvisoley it didnt work cuz im still here, unfortunately. im not quite sure u understand why i hurt myself but thats ok. most ppl dont. thanks 4 the comment.

  • 20 years ago

    by Jasmina

    Hey Amy,
    This poem was extremly good, I liked it very much, sorry about what happened, I really am, but things will start to get better, don't worry, don't give up hope.

  • 20 years ago

    by Robyn Park

    HOLY SHIT!!!! that was amazing. SO much emotion and pain, I felt like I was the person. OMG! Im speechless...that was so groovelishiously wonderful. Never stop writing.

  • 20 years ago

    by Amy

    to who cares*sounding depressed, yes i do realise there are many ppl in worse situations then me but until u have actually lived my life u will never know the extent of what i feel. not many ppl understand me. a lot say they do but a lot of the times they dont have a clue. i am sorry 4 those ppl who have diseases and are going 2 die but i cannot help the way i feel. and i cant change my heart, but thanks 4 the comment.

  • 20 years ago

    by Vanessa

    A nice poem. it would work out well if you use rhyming words more often. great plot. you would be welcome to a poetry guild i know. you'll be a great poet cosidering how you wrote the poem. the plot, the words and stuff. keep on and you'll be the greatest *winks and smiles*

  • 20 years ago

    by Anonymous

    I like your poem becuase that is just how I feel. I cut myself for the pain. I like the pain because it tells me I am still alive. People tell me I am insane and disturbed but I think everyone else is. If you don't want to die there is something wrong with you.

  • 20 years ago

    by lisa marie

    This was a rilly good poem...lots of emotion and stuff...my parents argured too and i too grew up around drugs and when i was 12 something happened too...weird.

  • 20 years ago

    by nichole

    that is SO awesome!! i loved it and it honestly made me cry! dont give up! that is not the way to ecscape! tell someone- a teacher-cops-anyone! hang in there! may god bless you!