Invisible

by Rachel   Apr 25, 2007


For every time he looks past her
a small portion of her heart is lost
it's seems like almost every day
that she has to pay this cost

today he's her knight in shining armour
tomorrow he'll be a jerk
there's no way to understand it
no explanation will work

they pretend to be the best of friends
when in reality
all they are is strangers that wander
in their world of fantasies

now she usually is quite happy
but it's just not quite enough
to satisfy her aching heart
this whole games a bluff

she tells herself she's satisfied
but when it comes down to it
this feeling doesn't quite make the cut
she's falling in a pit

is there anything that can fix this?
is there any hope for her?
she wonders about these things each day
but it's all just one big blur

nothing seems to heal it
laughing just doesn't do the trick
she longs to feel unbroken
but that's hard when he's making her feel sick

with every comment he makes
she knows it's only a deeper lie
but she hides her senses in hopes
that maybe some day he'll say "hi"

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  • 17 years ago

    by scarlett

    I think many people can see themselves as this "invisible" person. i know i have. it seems to me that in everyones life there's always going to be that one person that you just want but you know you could do better without because of all the pain they cause. nice poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by YOU MAKE ME SMILE

    Wow thats really good i wish i could ryme better i just started but u r great at this

  • 17 years ago

    by Hope

    I love this poem, its the thoughts are well oragnised. I guess one of the reason why I love it so much, is that fact that it speaks to me. Hey your actually telling my story, am just getting over a situation like this. I love it, keep up the good work.

    Hope

  • 17 years ago

    by Jason Rainey

    She wants him. Its clear of that much. Has she told him? Or is he just that clueless?
    I liked it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    For the most part I felt confused in this poem, at first I thought they were together the half way down the poem I couldnt tell you anything then at the end this was all a fantacy of hers. I just felt there was no structure at all to the peice nothing to make this flow within a single message, Nice try maybe next time Plot121

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