This is a very touching piece.

"I will carry this burden
Through thick and thin
To hold on to my love's
Fatal sins."

You've summed up this whole account and encompassed so much with those lines. A nerve-wracking, wonderful piece. Thank you for sharing! Love, Debbie

Aw thats so sad.. but really nicley written its terrible when guys just run off like that as if its not their responsibility too

Very strong great poem 5/5.

I love it wow oh so very much! Ilove how you put so much character you should comment my poems

This was deep and beautiful!
i loved every word, i can clearly tell it came from yer heart.
i loved the flow of it too.
job well done.

Wow that was a beautiful poem and very true about so many women out there. I hate when guys do that, it shows how idiots they can be. I liked it, well done. Good emotion in it