WOW! this is an amazing poem! i love the smooth flow and the perfect wording you used, it all fits together nicely to make an incredibly good poem! congrats on a fine write! i'd really love it if you'd read/comment/rate my poems and i'll continue to return the favour! thanks alot!

Hmmm. intresting writing style. i wihs oneday you find the true love. the person who will hold you in his strong and warm arms and will let you go very far from the pains and sorrows of this world.

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nice job in this poem 5/5

Hmmm. intresting writing style. i wihs oneday you find the true love. the person who will hold you in his strong and warm arms and will let you go very far from the pains and sorrows of this world.

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nice job in this poem 5/5