We're fading...

by Brett   Apr 25, 2007


I can feel that we're fading
As if I'm out in the ocean wading
Step by step were farther away
Impossible to stop it's unforgiving way

Trying to stand and fight the current
All these years, i should have learnt
That trying to make us as tight as could be
Only pushes me farther into the sea

Why don't you feel the way i do
Even after all that we've been through
I just don't think we should end it like this
Thoughts of life without you, seem like abyss

Lets fix things, just one more time
We could easily wipe off all of this grime
Start over new, everything will be fine
You get the candles, I'll get the wine

But it seems like you want it this way
Not right now, but soon someday
The inevitability is surely degrading
It just seems to me that we're slowly fading...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Ooo, you're excellent at rhyming! It seems to flow like water as i read, i like it =)
    And i agree with the one sidedness, it always makes relationships so much more difficult.
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Tisha

    Awesome write..it is always hard when there is only one person that is trying to make it work.Thanks for taking the time to comment on my poem. Tisha