I love the last stanzas. Beautifully worded. GReat 5/5

I'm here to make a life
Bereft of sorrows
And to make you my wife
Never to be morose

This is the most catching lines in this piece. Great ending sure 5/5

Heya
another great poem
i like this one more then the other
though not totally sure what morose means
but the poem does speak its meaning
to a certain extent
good job

Keenan

Man what a superb ending. Thats exceptional, really great.
loved it.