Our Dance

by David   Apr 25, 2007


A dance of love
Takes away my breath
The grace of movement
As we slide to the left

Then we dart back
Quickly to the right
All eyes are on us
On this perfect night

My arms are wrapped
Around your smooth bare back
We are swaying smoothly
There's nothing we lack

Our moves are shining bright
We are perfect and one
Our bodies are connected
And we are dancing for fun

As the song comes to an end
We embrace once more
Together we leave, hand in hand
Off our magical dance floor.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sarahh

    Beautiful =]
    love it
    comments on mine ;x
    thanks keep up your great work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Fsams

    This piece is really catching indeed. The wordings are great and your imagery is marvellous. I like the way you have kept the poem rhyming.

    5/5 Fsams

  • 18 years ago

    by fearose

    Thanks for the comment. This is a really, great poem that sort of visualizes the emotion in a dance and the connection. A dance is like a love story with ups and downs, mistakes and sucess.
    Well done. 5/5
    -Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by KAP DAR

    My arms are wrapped
    Around your smooth bare back
    We are swaying smoothly
    There's nothing we lack...is it just me or is it getting hott in here? lol 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Vivid images, of fairy tale places. Very well flow spectacalir, well penned, The word choice has lft me almost speechless. it just fit so well, music for my soul. Beautiful peice.5/5

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