Well written. I loved the flow and the use of words. Great Job. Keep up the fantastic work.

Peace, Joe

I LOVE this! I love dancing, so yeah that's great to begin with. It's pretty unique, which is always a good thing. The flow is perfect, it was really easy to read because of that. The description, although for a short poem, caused great imagery. I was imagining the poem actually happening as I was reading it. The word choice was good for this poem, as was the rhyming. The ending is really well written. A wonderful write. Well done. =] 5/5

Tammie

Very beautifull write.Thank you for your comment on mine ,comments are always appreciated ,never been great at spelling.Keep writng as you have a great talent and I'll keep reading.Take care.

Amazing flow of words and expression!!!!!!!! I now what a dance feels like.

Well done...beautiful imagery of a perfect dance! All the best, Debbie

Very nice david, it was defiently a relief from all the love poems that most people write, and i really enjoyed it. very creative and unique.

-Kevin

This is really beautiful, and it really is a very calming poem too read, because the flow is so smooth yet controlled and the penning is so beatiful 5/5
gabriella

I loved the description and connection in this poem 5/5

OoOoO..keep going! Defnitly! I love this poem your such an amazing writer I envy you I love love love this poem

Adorable

That was so sweet however I think it could have been a bit longer.
Still, a very nice magical experience.

Great job David :) The imagery of this poem is excellent. You could see this dance in your mind.
Take Care Cindy

Aweh! That made me smile. It was cute, and the emotion was amazing as well as the imaginative stanzas. I really liked this poem too. =)

5.5

I like it ALOT! you have an incredible tallent!

Very nice, very unique and a good flow, great work, keep it up.

Vivid images, of fairy tale places. Very well flow spectacalir, well penned, The word choice has lft me almost speechless. it just fit so well, music for my soul. Beautiful peice.5/5

My arms are wrapped
Around your smooth bare back
We are swaying smoothly
There's nothing we lack...is it just me or is it getting hott in here? lol 5/5

Thanks for the comment. This is a really, great poem that sort of visualizes the emotion in a dance and the connection. A dance is like a love story with ups and downs, mistakes and sucess.
Well done. 5/5
-Angela

This piece is really catching indeed. The wordings are great and your imagery is marvellous. I like the way you have kept the poem rhyming.

5/5 Fsams

Beautiful =]
love it
comments on mine ;x
thanks keep up your great work!