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by Maddie Apr 25, 2007 category : Sadness, depression / about depression
Come into my world See what I have seen Hear what I have heard Feel what I have felt But do not say one word... Hold all the tears, From falling on the ground Wait till the night When no-one is around Take all the pain Do not scream not once Cry with the rain But only if you must If only someone knew If only someone cared If only someone noticed If only love was shared Hide the scars Hide the hurt Hide your feelings Walls will work Build them high Build them tall Do not let anyone in Do not let them fall Come into my world See what I have seen Hear what I had heard Feel what I have felt But shhhhh... do not say one word...
by LittleBlackRose
I think you did a great job with this poem It's a bit simple, but that's the strenght of it. I can really feel the emotions especially this stanza is great: See what I have seen Hear what I have heard Feel what I have felt But do not say one word... Well done!!