Oh wow....this is very powerful. I love it, it had great flow, love the choice of words and very well written. Excellent 5/5

Loved the vocab in this poem it made what you were saying very powerful and strong, Great emotions throughout this. Very well written. Well done on this peice of poetry. 5/5~mel

Not bad, really.. I liked it alot.

Great poem. I really liked it. It's different. 5/5