To die

Great poem thanks for the comment on "The Void"

Hun if you want me to help you improve..I will point some things as they are so important..

Capitalizing the begining letters everytime makes it look so good..And just use real statements of the shortcuts

I mean Y=Why

But I liked the concept in here and there
So if you keep on writing and listen my points..I'm sure you will be well-known here because you have talent

Keep it up
Take care,
Laura

Wow...another one that blow my mind lols Like your others you expressed the deep pain and sadness so perfectly that I could actually feel it and I totally understand and relate to this one except that must people can't see the cuts and bruises because their not on the surface =P You truly have a talent and I hope you never let anyone make you believe otherwise ^_^
Rhea

Omg. wow.
yeah okay the flow and style is a little off at the beginning but this is a really nice poem. i love it. i can tell it come straight from the heart. you are talented. keep up the good work