Gem
I love your formed poetry. This one is really beautiful.
Take Care Love Cindy

Yes, so...beautiful is this poem.
Unique and exquisite in its own way,

Even the most shortest poems you can make so great, i like the form you have wrote in making it different and unique :)

Your greatest fan ^^

This poem is real treat to mind, such beautiful imagery, a master piece.

Take care
chavii.

Wow loved the word choice, all your structured poems are just soo good ^_^

~*~Jen~*~

Nice job! You always conquer so many forms of poetry. For that I applaud! Beautiful poem!
Charisma*

Ah! How refreshing this piece is! The fact that you used minerals/jewels as descriptions to the "subject," as well as on your other pieces, is rather captivating in a way that leaves the reader in a delightful trance. I like this piece very much! Keep it coming, ma'dear! Love, Debbie

Ohhh this was so pretty!
It created very vivid pictures for me and the wording was a joy to read.

This one reminds me of the ocean. I wish I lived on the beach.

Excellent poem, truly amazing, unique style and well written, loved the ending.

Once again Gem, you amaze me! To the point and totally beautiful!

This was extraordinary, i loved rythem. keep it up

Wonderful poem:) I could almost see it. 5/5

Congrats on winning the weekly poetry contest...this piece is excellent in every way! Great job on the form!

I loved this form of poetry,, good job!! Congrats on winning the weekly poetry contest!!
Janaynay

Omg! Congratulations, hunnie!

Gem Congrats on the win. Beautiful poetry :)
Love Cindy

Beautiful poem hun

Awsome poem

Very rythmic, and imaginative. Great vocabulary!