I am......spechless. this poem took my breath away. It is amazingly well written. I will have to read more of your poems if they are anything like this one. Great flow, well pinned. You did an awesomw job, and deserve a lot of praise. 5/5

Woah hun, this is definately something you should be very proud of. It's excellently written. The flow is amazing, and the rhyming is so natural, everything just works in well together. Your descriptions made great imagery, making a really original write, which is always great to see. Truely an excellent write. Very well done. =] 5/5

Much love,
Tammie xoxo

Very nicely written dark poem. Your rhyming and word choices are excellent....conjuring very vivid imagery. Only one small suggestion...maybe break up the one large verse into several smaller stanzas...otherwise it is very well done. All the best, Debbie 5/5

A frightening more intense description of the line betwween heaven and hell. Good job.

It's a wonderful poem, very well written and very original...it flows in a very natural way...

5/5

*isabel*

Wonderful poem.
It flowed well and your word choices were great.
The rhyming wasn't forced.
Keep it up 5/5

[Sarah]

Wow htisp oem gave of a osrt of aura lol loved it it was so well written i was glued literally lol.

xxx alex xxx

I like this one. It is powerful and well written, title is also great. I did not like the ending. I not prefer religion things in poems. But rate is 5/5.

Wow. it was amazing. it was beautifully written, the flow was great the structure was just spectacular and it was just great, 5/5

This poem is truly excellent, the word choice and flow are perfect and the imagery is very vivid. We really can't ever know for sure whether or not heaven and hell exist util we actually get there, until then just live each day as if it were your last. Amazing job 5/5 GG23

Very effective, greatly written with vivid imagery.
My favorite part is:
-This is where one can scream, one can yell,
one can cry tears of blood, no one will tell.
Here you feel no thirst, no hunger for food,
There is no happiness, and no form of mood.-
I like the ending very much, it is effective.
5/5 from me