Hope

by Corinne   Apr 25, 2007


One bitterly cold December day
I walked a barren landscape
Within and without
For no flowers bloomed, no birds sang
In the garden - or in my soul

In a wooded area I came upon
An elderly man and woman
Each standing, arm extended
With a palmful of peanuts
As they looked up expectantly at the trees

I watched as tiny birds
Flitted ever nearer
Black Capped Chickadees
Came to pluck tasty morsels
From their hands

Overcoming my shyness
I approached the couple
Might I feed the birds too?
The man smiled
And poured some food into my palm

I lifted my arm and waited
My elbow ached
My hand felt numb
Yet I was determined
To hold that little creature

Suddenly, a little pirate
With black bandana and beard
Perched on my hand
Come to claim his booty -
- And my heart

With his tiny clawed feet
Wrapped around my pinky
He appraised the contents in my hand
Snatched the plumpest nut
And flew off
Taking my burden with him

No plundering was involved
It was a fair exchange
A peanut
For the return of hope

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sourav

    Yes, it's beautiful. It's different. The imagination, the description... Everything is really so beautiful!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bogie

    Excellent write Coninne, I loved how
    this poem took me on a visual journey
    and felt the emotion as the exchange
    was being made, giving me a happy
    feeling knowing hope is always there.
    Write On,
    Bogie

  • 17 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Absolutely beautiful.....perfect. Love the ending lines...

    No plundering was involved
    It was a fair exchange
    A peanut
    For the return of hope

    So uplifting in a few short lines.....5/5 All the best, Debbie

  • 17 years ago

    by Melissa

    This is simply fantastic. Beautiful, amazing imagery. This is my new fave from you, so pretty and such an awesome message. I love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a wonderful poem. I love the way you have put this story to verse.
    Excellent job!
    Take Care Cindy