What a wonderful poem. I love the way you have put this story to verse.
Excellent job!
Take Care Cindy

This is simply fantastic. Beautiful, amazing imagery. This is my new fave from you, so pretty and such an awesome message. I love it!

Absolutely beautiful.....perfect. Love the ending lines...

No plundering was involved
It was a fair exchange
A peanut
For the return of hope

So uplifting in a few short lines.....5/5 All the best, Debbie

Excellent write Coninne, I loved how
this poem took me on a visual journey
and felt the emotion as the exchange
was being made, giving me a happy
feeling knowing hope is always there.
Write On,
Bogie

Yes, it's beautiful. It's different. The imagination, the description... Everything is really so beautiful!