Alone

by jeffery sechrest   Apr 25, 2007


Sitting alone in this room
My mind starts to wonder
What i did so wrong to make you do this
In my past i was your superman
Now i am just a no one
Passing you by in the hall
Slowly sinking into the abyss
Trying to find some stable ground
To make you realize you can still trust me
But as i start to wonder why
The four letter lie you said
Haunts me to this very day

P.S. This is sorta mixed up and everything so say what you want about it i don't care cause these are my famous last words to my haunted past

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  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    It is raw it is painful it is real, that makes it good, its not over worked its just how you felt, i like this one alo0t, and check out my poem changes, its like this one, i just threw the words on the screen and i liked it, yours is great keep at it,
    nessa

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Much better, m'dear.

    5/5
    ~Stephen White

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Abysse = abyss
    (sp)'

    Your poems are incredible. Although they would be much better with grammar and capitalization, they stun me how addictive they are. I seem to love your poems... So simple, yet powerful. You have an ability. Once I get you to write poems with grammar and capitalization, you will be on your way.

    Great job.
    5/5
    ~Stephen White

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