by xXAxTwistedxWishXx Apr 25, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
As she stood so close to the sun |
Nice poem. |
by Nix
Topic is interesting and this poem is very original. Very effective ending. This piece is short but still very powerful. I like the atmosphere that you created with just a few words. 5/5 |
by Unreal
Really Really Good |
by becca
Really emotional and deeply touching. your words are really strong and you structured it well. definately a beautiful, but truely moving and sad poem too. keep it up! xXx |