Is This Our End?

by ShootingStar179   Apr 25, 2007


Is this the end?
End all cascading tears.
Tears of friendship breaking, you leaving,
Leaving to a far better place,
Place of a new life,
Life without a girl,
Girl who loved you,
You knew this was to come,
Come away with me,
Me, your best friend,
Friend who never let you down,
Down to the depths of depression.

Depression, is this what I feel?
Feel my heart crying for a smile,
Smile to tell me this isn't the end.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Depression, is this what I feel?
    Feel my heart crying for a smile,
    Smile to tell me this isn't the end. "

    Those last three lines left me speechless..
    Crying for a smile.. a beautiful line.
    A real tear jerker.
    5/5
    *Gem*

    (I've never heard of that song by reliant.. k?, lol. It was a title contest)

  • 17 years ago

    by Lyndsay Kalyta

    "Feel my heart crying for a smile,
    Smile to tell me this isn't the end."

    I absolutely loved this poem! wow...My favourite part amidst this great work is the last two lines. It's funny how such a simple gesture, like a smile, can give away such a powerful and amazing feeling like love. Great work, really...you are a great writer! Keep it up.

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