Rain cycle

by mesolithic   Apr 25, 2007


Heavy clouds part
and sun rays fill in the spaces,
beaming down on all your faces,
standing there,
alone,
waiting to be noticed,
you pull back,
and you collide.

The rain falls,
showering you with
sky blood,
as the hole closes back up, and you are back where you started.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I loved the way you used the pronoun you so it sounded like the rain was a person it really made it work welldone

    please r/r/c 'The bodys' rain' thanx
    xxx alex xxx