Well... it was to long, and a little hard to read.. maybe try to put it into stanzas...

That would be the styling of my poetry.... Its how I write

YaY. One of my favorites. And, for me, not one bit hard to read. :P As always, Tiny Person gives a 5.

Well my wife, it has been a while since I've commented on one of your poems, but they are still quite O-SAM!!!! if you ever quit writing I will have to hunt you down you bum!

Ally-ness