Comments : Not-So-Accidentally Distracted

  • 17 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    This is another good poem of yours i can begin to see your style as im reading through, erm.. perhaps just as an idea

    I'm opening up, I'm gonna give you a chance.
    I want you to be the one who will lift me up,

    maybe have out instead of up it sounds a bit more eaiser with the flow.

    xxx alex xxx