Oh yeah say it loud and proud love this poem and its message its awsome 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine. |
"Are you now man enough for me?" |
by Gem
How powerful and strong was that! |
Wow i felt that when i was reading it, i love poems that capitivate me you have a gift |
by Vanessa
Very moving. I loiked this one best of all. I caould feel the anger leaving a bitter taste in my mouth.Excellent. 5/5 |
This is a good poem. |
Wow i really like this poem......great poem..5/5..........check out some of my poems if u would thankz... |
by Marc Ortiz
Aww I like the ending! I enjoyed this poem! its like watching a movie! well done! keep writing! |
by Sydney
Powerful and strong. I could feel the anger in it which makes it even more amazing XD |
Hey!!...Beautiful poem...great ending....strong message protrayed through this 1...very powerful write...kp it up!.. |
Now thats a poem, you can feel the hate illuminating from your words, very nice |
by David
Black eye broken arm.. |
Okay, this was by far my favorite of yours. |
by skynerraw
I enjoyed the poem, but I think it would be better if you put "you" instead of "u" and "And" instead of "n" I think it would look better, other than that I enjoyed reading it and full of emotion, I'm so sorry if this is about your life... loved the poem... |
Great job... the flow again was off in the start... but you picked it up again quickly.. i love the positive ending .. the poem was very vivid and filled with wonderful wording.. |
by Boy
Do you enjoy watching me fall? |
by Fluffy
On the whole this piece is effective, although there are some grammatical errors: |
by Dee
This is very well written very touching, good work. 5/5 |
by cory
That was incrediblely well written, i could feel the rage emanating from the verses.great job!!= ) another 5/5 |
Wow, 20 comments, haha. Great piece, I don't know what else I can write that these people already haven't, except that I hope you never have to write something like this again. What doesn't kill us makes us stronger, unless we become paralyzed. haha. Keep up the good work. ~Zach |