Wow that was depressing, descriptive and absolutely wonderful great poem 5/5 i hope you read one of mine.

Heartbreaking and emotional....excellent as always.... i love that single lined refrain you have in there

Its sad.... take care

Very emotional. I luv it :)

Aw. its really sad... but amazing in that sense. haha : ) i dont know if its possible for something to be sad but amazing but if it is you obviously have done it
great job
<3 jess
p.s. id love if you could check out some of my poems as well id really appreciate your opinion on them

You are the love that burns to ashes
buried in your tears that bleed so blue
aaahhhhh. very nicely done . great writing style
man your writing force me to give you 5/5

Hey it was sad but good