by Greg Beam Apr 25, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
This is not a sad love story |
by Brittany C
This poem makes a good story. It is kind of longer then what I would normally like but you made it work. Everything about it worked out great. Another 5/5 |
by KJ
Another good write! This poem was really true and sort of an eye-opener to every reader i believe. I also love the way your title matched it perfectly. It also showed great emotion |
by Hawaiizang3l
This is truely sad, i can feel the pain, the hurt...so much feelings! Your choice of words really brought out the emotions in this poem! Great job!! |
by David
Love the length of the poem and the word choice of every line, it was great you told a story and that story was amazing, truly. |
This was amazing. I loved it begining to end. The whole story line and flow, was just incredable! Very well written, keep it up! |