This is a very interesting emotional piece...
Quite long, though, as I love to read xD is just the kind of poem i am into =)
I just find a little bit confusing, yet extremely original, God's part in all of the poem... I find it confusing because I don't seem to understand if God brought you together or helped you when it ended or both... well...poems do tend not to be very objective, so i guess it is for the reader to find it out... ;)
5/5
*isabel*

This poem is written amazingly. I loved it. There is so much emotion in it. Great job. 5/5

This is a very deep love poem that certainly seems to have been written from an experience of passion. I liked the contemporary wording mixed with the old wording that cannot seem to be improved upon. In my opinion overall this one is a keeper.

I enjoyed reading this poem, it had a really good rhythm to it and even though the lines varied, it came together nicely. However, there didn't seem to be much of a story to it, it kept jumping from relationship to God. This didn't affect the outcome.
You kept repeating words in verses, here:

Minds are set to think and make
Especially when you make mistakes

Just doesn't sound quite right unfortunately. Other than that, great poem, loved the read.

Peace. Sole x

This was amazing. I loved it begining to end. The whole story line and flow, was just incredable! Very well written, keep it up!

Love the length of the poem and the word choice of every line, it was great you told a story and that story was amazing, truly.

5/5 david

This is truely sad, i can feel the pain, the hurt...so much feelings! Your choice of words really brought out the emotions in this poem! Great job!!

Keep it up =n= Take care!!

Another good write! This poem was really true and sort of an eye-opener to every reader i believe. I also love the way your title matched it perfectly. It also showed great emotion

This started out a sad love story
Ended up at Gods good glory
No one can stand in Gods way
If we stay faithful starting today

^^favorite stanza =}
5/5

PrElUdE 2 A KiSs

This poem makes a good story. It is kind of longer then what I would normally like but you made it work. Everything about it worked out great. Another 5/5