by Bryce Apr 25, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
This is your left foot, |
by desiree
You use excellent detail. |
by Beatrice
Really great poem and I loved the flow. 5/5 |
by Estefania
Very nice! liked it |
by kasia nicole
I liked that one one and hwo u put dancing with it and discribed life very good |
by ctmskm
Nicely written, it rhymed well also. it seems like a storyline that has a lot of meaning still behind it. keep up the writing. "it helps" |