by Bryce Apr 25, 2007
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
I lust to be a cloud. |
by Kate Hicks
You sound like a guy at the end of his rope. It realy comes out with such passion. 5/5 |
by Angela
I haven't read all of your poems, but they seems really short. If you made them longer the person reading them would have more time to get the feeling or emotion that you're trying to send.. Though I really liked them:D |
by kasia nicole
I liked that one to and i know i wish that could happen some times and take a break from life |
by MyMuse
Oh i love this, it was so short but such a big meaning to it, it feels heavy in my mind. But i just loved it! If i like anymore of your poetry, your going to be one of my fave authors!! |
by TearStainedMess
This poetry is so sad, yet so simple. It explains so much, and yet, doesn't explain enough. Just that you want to be the cloud say so much about you.. Very nicely written. |