Well this is a very good poem mousie, and it has alot of meaning behind it. i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!

Great poem once again........... you have came up with a great idea that is why the poem s that beautiful.
another 5/5 from me as always

Great poem once again........... you have came up with a great idea that is why the poem s that beautiful.
another 5/5 from me as always

Cute, and so sweet. Excellent flow and the word choice was perfect. 5/5