In Those Depths (Secret Message)

by Christie   Apr 25, 2007


In those depths lies truth in fear,
Far from those concealed so near,
Some few think, but ignorance is bliss,
So close, it wasn't meant like this.
As is owed, sorrow's derived,
Surpassed as found, only to thrive.
Disappointments shout as silence falls,
In answer, take heed of the call.
For few care, yet from their look,
Calling may; dark dreams mistook,
Waiting for the forgotten to emerge,
An end is reached in expressions unheard.

© Christie 2007

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To reveal the secret message:

On the first line, write down the first letter, on the second line, write down the second letter and so on, using every line but the last two. These lines have a message within themselves, which is only for me. =)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Willow

    Its a beautifully penned poem. hard to understand but at the same time it's wow!! i didn't really get the secret message though. bit tricky to follow the letter when they are so small. loved the poem though. 5/5.
    love willow oxo