by Alesia
It was a truly beautiful poem. Other than the fact that there was a few grammatical mistakes, It had a nice flow, and a good rhythm for a song. Good work. |
by tormented
I thought it was lovely in my head it lost a few beats though just in a few spots. but thats it. i found it lovely and quite sooting to read. |
I really like this. i know what that feels like.. i ask my self thoses questions everyday!.. anyway 5/5 |
by Startle Me
Your format wasn't as fantastic as the last poem. |
by Teria
The only problem with this almost perfect poem is: |
by Kelsea
Wow, that is pretty. I can really feel the emotions in your words, and it has a really good flow. |
by CHOKE
Ah, the ever so classic"why?" |
by Goran Rahim
Wow, this was an amazing poem, with alot of emotion, keep it up dear... |
by TrUtH hUrTs
Very well written..self inquisition.. heheh... its a healthy thing to do.. but its a bittersweet poem.. u seem to love and hate the past all at the same time.. which makes this a really interesting poem...keep it up |
by Darien
I felt that there were a lot of questions in this poem. It really was missing something. |
Wonderful poem. I like the repetativeness of it, it fits well with the message you are trying to convey. If you want, you could probably add on a little bit, there are still some questions I have about the poem.. But other than that it was great. 5/5 from me. |