by Molly
Good job! 5/5 |
by Lonesomeme
Ok, I am trying to figure the connection out between the last line and the rest of the poem...I enjoyed it all, but at the very last line...I was baffeld. I gave you a 5/5 because if you drop the last two lines and end it with something similar to the rest it would be a great nature poem. If there maybe is something I am missing, please private message me and let me in on it, I would like to enjoy it with you. -Unattractive1 |