by Helen
I like it :) |
by David
Ah this was so sad. nearly should be out of the love catagory. well this was excellent anyway. the way it was. the ending with tlaking bout him saying i love you is so good, really finished this poem. |
It's v. nice poem i liked it ... you've showed a lot of feelings .. great job.. keep it up |
by Cindy
This is so sad. The pain of heartbreak is the worst. Keep writing. |
by redneck
I think that the poem will come in handy to many people. i thought that it was really good. even though it doesnt rime. but all poems dont have to rime. |
by Whisper
Wow.. good job. Thank you so much for your comment. It was so sweet and it made me feel so good about my poem. Thanks... and as for your gorgeous-sad-lovely-amazing-heart warming poem... I loved it. Very good. I understand it completely... Saying I love you means so much until everything falls apart and then it hurts... cause then you realize they dont love you anymore. But anyways, good job. |
by Birgit
The title already makes you curious to read this poem.. It made me think: Who said what? What did he/she say? And then I read it, and I was like: aw =(! Really good job. Keep it up. |
This poem is full of truth...yeah some guys lie,...and lie alot....and love is just a game for them ...yeah i know what you mean...great work5/5:) |
Wow i loved the last lines for they relate to me the most 5/5 |
by Emma
Wow loved it:) nice job |
by Bre Monique
I like this poem a lot ~ I think it's because throughout reading it, I had one guy in my mind the whole time ~ I love all your poems ~ They're so easy to relate to ~ Keep up the good work ~ |
Wow i liked how you wrote it and i can relate because basily the same thing happened to me and i hated it but great job keep it up |
by dAnCe4aDrEaM
This poem really hits the spot. its perfect. so many people can relate to it...like me. and like others said, those last lines are perfect. they are so flippen true. so, great job! i love it. |
This poem is written so well. I loved it and it almost made me cry. And it reminds me of some of my poems I haven't put up yet. Lol. I loved it though. Keep up the amazing work Rikku. Love you bunches <333 |
by Lisa
Great work! |
by Airika
Yea that one little word..when its over hurts the most...this is great....=] love it.. |
by babyPB
This poem is great, even though its short. 5/5 :) |
by Hidden1
Now that broke tears to my eyes because all that you said is true. I wish that when people say "I love you," that they mean it and let their actions show. Excellent work, very very good. |
by Paiger
Wow, great job :) |