Well, to start off, I don't know why people wouldn't like your poetry, if it is anything like this one. I enjoyed reading it. I think my favorite stanzas were..

"She controls time and space
Voices whisper around her
Muttering lies and words of betrayal
She listens to the sound of the wind
Blowing through a windchime 300 miles away
No words could be spoken to break her

A single expression, thoughtless expression
Is strewn across her face
As if she was stiff, still, a statue like figure
Amongst the shadows she stands
A single bloody tear drop falls from her eye
Breaking the plain of a puddle under foot"

It had an interesting message, but I thought it was deep. A few things could help it, such as periods. And some words changed a bit. But I thought as is was not too bad, anyhow, keep up the good work. 5/5
-Ally

This is a really really good poem!
It doesn't suck!...i liked it
now start challenging yourself, add rhymes and a pattern to it

thanks for reading and commenting on my poems!
love,
~shannon~

Well i don't know why you're saying everyone hates your writing, but i thought that was wonderful! i thought your wording was outstanding and the feeling you gave to the poem and the tone were deep and dark. i thought it was great, great flow and everything wonderful job 5/5

Wow Unattractive, very very beautiful poem. I feel like I can relate to the girl in this, it's so dark.. I love it. And I love how you use your words in this poem, kept me wanting to read more and more. Too bad it had to end though *cry* Nice job!! Keep up the good work dear 5/5 <3

~Loveless Nights~

Wonderful poem.
The flow was excellent and the word choices were good.

'She controls time and space
Voices whisper around her
Muttering lies and words of betrayal
She listens to the sound of the wind
Blowing through a windchime 300 miles away
No words could be spoken to break her'

Loved it.
Keep it up 5/5

|Sarah|

I like it. Not many poems can do what you did here, which is, show me how the author was feeling, making it reate to myself almost. It was cool! I really enjoyed that

I really liked this poem. It was like a mix between fantasy and the world today. Keep up the great work. Your poem really is wonderful. 5/5

Wow, really really beautiful. I have to say my favorite staza is
'She controls time and space
Voices whisper around her
Muttering lies and words of betrayal
She listens to the sound of the wind
Blowing through a windchime 300 miles away
No words could be spoken to break her'
I love the way you write. You are descrtive, deep and full of emtion. This poem is one of the best. 5/5

Wow..no complaints on this one!! Absolutely amazing!!! It was a bit 'dark' I guess you could say and I loved it!! Very descriptive and nice choice of words..Flow was great too..
5/5
tyanna

"She controls time and space
Voices whisper around her
Muttering lies and words of betrayal
She listens to the sound of the wind
Blowing through a windchime 300 miles away
No words could be spoken to break her"
^ AMAZING! I loved that stanza. Especially " she listens...to...break her."

You did a great job with this poem. If your others are the same, I don't see why people wouldn't want to read your poems.
I think I'll stay caught up with yours, and maybe read a few before this. :]

Keep it up, sweetie.
<3

Oh gee. this was excellent. wat a great descriptive poem.

5/5 David

Wonderful poem, good choice of words... I really liked it. 5/5

Ah i agree with all the other members that have voted and say this is excellent and truly deserves a 5.

5/5 David

That was beautiful.

Good job man 5/5!

Wow, this was just an amazing work
so much feelings, sadness , and emotion mixed up that created this great poem.

Excellent poem!!!..lovely wrk!..
"She controls time and space
Voices whisper around her
Muttering lies and words of betrayal
She listens to the sound of the wind
Blowing through a windchime 300 miles away
No words could be spoken to break her.

the stanza above is sooo...beautiful!!
This is a superb peice of wrk!!...loved it!
kp it up!
xxPoojaxx

I like the emotion in this and the story.
Both were very strong and could be felt/ reconginzed thorughout the entire poem.
Very strong.
Nicely done.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

O love this poem

Beautiful. simply beautiful..

xxx