Good job on your poem. Very sad. Hope things get better. Keep writing.
Take Care Cindy

I have to say, I am not sure which you lost a best friend or a loved one or a boyfriend or husband...honestly, it doesn't matter. I have only read two of your poems so far and already I can tell that you right directly from your heart...that is something that most poets can not do...or at least not with finesse, you've got it though...wonderful read. 5/5.

I think you did a really good job on this. Strong emtions, keep my intrest, and held my attention. Well written, nice word chose, excellent work. keep up the good job. If you keep writting I will keep reading. 4/5

I saw a lot of places were the rhymed appeared to be forced. The flow was a bit shaky. A little bit of advice, when you do your stanzas, try and have them the same size as the others. It makes the poem have more structur. Also, try and keep the same amount of syllables as possible in each of the lines. Other than that, well done.
God Bless 4/5
<3Tay^__^

I really enjoyed this.
The rhyme scheme through me off at times, as sometimes there was a certain rhyme scheme then it switched and then there was no rhyme scheme at all.
I think if you try and have a stable rhyme scheme, it will make the flow so much better.
However, I think you did a good job with this, the first stanza realyl pulled me in and from thereon it just kept getting better and better.