Comments : You pay now(child abuse)

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a sad but very good poem tracy, a few grammer mistakes, like capitalizing the beggining of sentences. commas and periods at the end. i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by moonlil

    Great poem! It is really sad..

  • 17 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Tracy,
    You know this is part of healing when you realize that their punishment is coming. Whether it will be in our lifetime or after Judgement day. The world is already a better place because one more abuser is gone. Touching write. Great Job,
    Your Friend,
    Kay

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Tracy
    Your poems are written straight from your heart and that is where they touch me. How can a parent be so cruel? I was blessed with 2 wonderful parents. Yet I have seen so many terrible things in my life. Telling your story through your writing will help so many others. Excellent job on this one.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by sadeyes

    I am very sad by this poem no parent should hurt or turn their backs on their children