Kill the Corpse

by alone in the crowd   Apr 25, 2007


Bound to the truth that there is no truth.
Hurt by lies, molested minds.
Tear me apart, hold me down,
Kill my dreams, murder my soul.
Continue these crimes until no purity surrounds me.
Leave me to wilt in the darkness of my nightmares.
Drag me across the cold hard ground.
Slash my arms and legs.
Let me bleed, make me bleed, force me to bleed.
Watch the blood puddle at my wounds.
Mix a drink of death:
my blood and tears, a salty smoothness.
Aknowledge my pain, create my pain.
Leave me mangled, distressed.
Let my heart harden and deteriorate.
Kill me now that i am dead.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    First off i'd like to say thanks on commenting my poem =) much appreciated. Secondly wow this was anamazing poem, The word choice and vocab u used throughout this was strong deep and powerful, I loved the flow and the emotion portrayed was fantastic. The only thing i would say is you should maybe work a little on the structure, maybe putting this into stanzas because i think it would be a great styled poem. Some of the lines need to be made shorter and to the length of others to even out the flow just a little so the syllable count is better but other then them to things which i cant vote lower then a 5 for as this style could be your own personal one, I found this to be great. Well done on a nicely written poem~mel

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