This is a very good poem sara, love the flow, one thing though i would capitalize the title "One Gaze". but that is up to you, i give this poem a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

This is really good

So because I love soccer I grew to higher leagues and levels. There is a whole story to it I could probably make a book, but right now I am playing select U-19 futbol. And then next year I am going to try for a club league where it may take me to a good premier team and I can start to make money playing.

Good job look up my new poems, thanx 4 commenting! 5/5 4 me.

That is so emotional, wonderfully written dear!! It's spectaular!!! The flow and everything is awesome!! 5/5 for SURE!!

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

Wow!.another beautiful poem!...u just write.....Gosh I've no words......i love this 1.kp it up!!!!!....
Tk care!